Should We Be In School?
Construction rages by every corner at Cab Calloway. Dust gets in the air, and gunk and dirt is everywhere. Is this sanitary? We have no ceiling and not many rooms. The students and teachers are stuffed into old closet rooms with no windows and no air conditioning. The heat is intense, and the comfort is bad. Students need SOME comfort to think. And we sweat so much that we get dehydrated. And that raises another problem. With the pipes all exposed to the construction, and some are even leaking, is the drinking water clean? Sure we can get a drink at lunch, but lunch is at 10:20 and what about the other four hours? Unsanitary, uncomfortable, and intense heat.
Noise is another problem. While classes are going on, booming, loud noises burst. As some of you may know, it gets EXTREMELY annoying. The noise makes it ten times harder to focus. If any of you can focus with all the noise going on, you’ve got a real good talent.
This Article Will Also Be On My Other Blog (JumpingTuna)
-Philip Paverd:7th Grade News Editor
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Construction rages by every corner at Cab Calloway. Dust gets in the air, and gunk and dirt is everywhere. Is this sanitary? We have no ceiling and not many rooms. The students and teachers are stuffed into old closet rooms with no windows and no air conditioning. The heat is intense, and the comfort is bad. Students need SOME comfort to think. And we sweat so much that we get dehydrated. And that raises another problem. With the pipes all exposed to the construction, and some are even leaking, is the drinking water clean? Sure we can get a drink at lunch, but lunch is at 10:20 and what about the other four hours? Unsanitary, uncomfortable, and intense heat. Should we REALLY be in school?
hey, i edited ur article for u, it ooks good, i just added a conclusion sentence.
--Sam S.
I like it, the begining really draws you in, and the artical is quick, intense, and makes an impact. I think Sam S. caught all of the mistakes, I think. I'll look closer when the artical makes the real cycle (Sam S., me, Sam K(?) and Mr. Mayo.
Great job!
Yay for me!
-Philip
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